tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6626505383482771839.post2223716166687822400..comments2013-11-23T23:10:42.592+01:00Comments on Strands and Strange Lands: One little big stepMiz Khttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10515500855764454649noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6626505383482771839.post-1773271855483739472009-09-12T14:08:23.622+02:002009-09-12T14:08:23.622+02:00Wow Miz K checking you out after a looong case of ...Wow Miz K checking you out after a looong case of blogitis has caused me to eshew all things blog. You're doing proper learning and stuff!! I'm envious! You go girl! Thought your text was deeply descriptive - a good strong start - and I'll gladly crit anything you care to share here or elsewhere. Good luck!Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02240529622188698757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6626505383482771839.post-7251074885427273932009-07-22T09:53:24.254+02:002009-07-22T09:53:24.254+02:00Hello Zeta - so great to hear from you again! You ...Hello Zeta - so great to hear from you again! You were right on the power outage - it's turned out to be a really fun thing to work with - I'm on the fourth small part of the story and though my writing class is almost over, I expect to continue toying with these pieces of story and trying to form them into a coherent whole. I didn't even try revising my NaNo, though I should - this is the first year I've been pretty happy with it and with my ideas. I'm looking forward to giving it a go again this year, but November's going to be tough as we have an extended trip back to the US taking up the last two weeks of the month. I should probably just look at those long flights as writing time. Let me know if you need a reader for your Nano as you revise - my rates (free) are very reasonable - LOL. Have a great day and thanks again for stopping by!Miz Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10515500855764454649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6626505383482771839.post-46671846728511771792009-07-22T08:36:41.454+02:002009-07-22T08:36:41.454+02:00Heya Miz K, Zeta here from NaNoWriMo--Great job! I...Heya Miz K, Zeta here from NaNoWriMo--Great job! I just swung by the blog while having brekkie and caught your fiction. How brave you were to post! I'm don't have the stones for that...<br /><br />I liked it all, but paragraphs two and three esp remained with me (desc of silence and kids in the wading pool), as I could very clearly visualise what you were describing. I assumed power outage, and then knowing your gift for providing the unexpected, I started wondering about apocalyptical end times, bankruptcy, takedown of the power grid by determined hackers, you know, that basic stuff o' novels. ;)<br /><br />I'm really glad you've gotten serious enough about your writing to take it to another level. I can't wait to buy your first novel! I've been battling my revision demons for a month or so as I start working over NaNoWriMo '08 to start sending out. I'm walkin' a hallway of depthless dark, and I can hear the nameless things slithering and whispering just an arm's length away. I can see the faint light of the room at the end, but crimeny, it's a long way down that passage.<br /><br />Oh crud! That whispering thing is my brain telling me I'm late for work. Ta for now!zetanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6626505383482771839.post-76729785000887404312009-07-17T12:42:37.609+02:002009-07-17T12:42:37.609+02:00Thanks very much, Max - I'm glad someone left ...Thanks very much, Max - I'm glad someone left a comment and I'm glad you thought it was vivid - that's what I was going for! I may consider posting fiction here a failed experiment and stick to "here's fun stuff we do" in the future.Miz Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10515500855764454649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6626505383482771839.post-56936455059939915602009-07-17T11:54:55.793+02:002009-07-17T11:54:55.793+02:00Cuz still nobody commented on your post after 3 da...Cuz still nobody commented on your post after 3 days, I decided to leave a comment even tough I'm not a native speaker and therefore not the best judge.<br /><br />Your text is very vivid! <br /><br />Don't know if that's the right word for it.<br />Let's say it simple: "I can see, what you're writing!" <br />;-)madlionnoreply@blogger.com